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Looking For the Perfect Beat

by Steven Hager

copyright 2012 by Steven Hager

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WE HEAR THE SOUNDS OF AN AUDIENCE MURMURING in anticipation of the start of something big.

KOOL HERC (O.S.)

Test, test. It’s the serious, serio-so joint-ski.

You’re listening to the sound system.

(an echo chamber is turned on)

The Hercoloids...loids...loids...

And I just want to say to all my b-boys...oys...oys...

Rock on.



WE HEAR A LOUD HIP HOP BREAK. The music builds in intensity as it continues throughout the sequence.

FADE IN:

A HELICOPTER VIEW OF UPPER MANHATTAN ROOFTOPS, ala the opening of West Side Story. WE SEE THE EAST RIVER BELOW, and the urban landscape shifts from roofs to freeways and the bombed-out vacant lots around them.

EXT. SOUTH BRONX

"SOUTH BRONX 1980"

KENNIE SHAKLEFORD, RAMON FRANCO and CHOLLY WILSON walk down a side street on a clear, crisp day. They move with cocky, aggressive bravado -- like the style lords of the street that they are. A CLOSE SHOT ON Kennie, who is the leader of this three-man crew. He is 17 and black. Ramon, 16, is short and wears a hat tilted at a jaunty angle. He is Puerto Rican. Cholly, 17, wears sunglasses and is well-built. He is black. A WIDER ANGLE shows the neighborhood, which resembles a war zone. Rubble-strewn empty lots and burned-out buildings line the block. They cut through a vacant lot, climb a mound of rubble and walk down an alley. Cholly falls several steps behind. Kennie puts his arm around Ramon while talking to him. Cholly catches up and jumps between them, wrapping his arms around Kennie and Ramon. Ramon stops in front of a wall heavily marked with graffiti. He points at the names on the wall. Ramon removes a giant magic marker from his coat and signs: "DJ RAMO" on the wall. The signature is executed with considerable style. Cholly asks for the marker by Ramon refuses to give it to him. Cholly demands the marker. Ramon smiles and puts the marker in his pocket. Kennie grabs Ramon from behind while Cholly retrieves the marker. Cholly signs: "CHOLLY 167." Cholly’s signature is a bit crude next to Ramon’s. Cholly hands the marker to Kennie, who signs "SOULSKI TOO." Kennie hands the marker back to Ramon.

A VARIETY OF ANGLES show the three walking down the street.

They enter a run-down, two-story house that is surrounded by larger buildings. The house has a small, dilapidated porch.

END OF SONG

INT. LIVINGROOM, THEODORE’S HOUSE

FROSTY and MEL, two black teenagers, are unraveling an electronic cable. They are standing in a large, empty room that has a dirty linoleum floor and no furniture. Sunlight streams through the bare window. The window panes are streaked with dirt. Two giant speakers for a customized sound system are stacked against one wall. Frosty and Mel set up two microphone stands.

INT. HALLWAY THEADORE’S HOUSE

Kennie, Ramon and Cholly enter the front door, walk down the hall and turn into the room.

INT. LIVINGROOM, THEODORE’S HOUSE

Kennie sees Frosty and Mel and stops abruptly. He looks perplexed. Kennie looks at Ramon, who shrugs his shoulders.

KENNIE

Yo. Whatcha doin wit that mike?

Mel looks at Frosty with a worried expression. Frosty unravels the mike cable and shows no emotion. He ignores Kennie.

KENNIE

Where’s Theodore?

FROSTY

In the back.

KENNIE

(to Cholly)

Stay here and keep and eye on this.

Kennie and Ramon walk through an archway into an empty room that once served as a dining area. THEODORE and LEP are seated on milk crates that are filled with records. They are just finishing a marijuana cigarette laced with angel dust. Lep greets Kennie effusively. Although medicated, Theodore appears worried. He offers the joint to Kennie, but it’s too small to even mess with.

KENNIE

I smell mint. Is that dusted? You know

I don’t be messin with no dust, bro,

why you dissin’ me like dat?

Little Lep! My man! How you been?

(they shake hands)

You know Ramon, my deejay.

LEP

Sure, we met. I seen your tags. I

like your style.

KENNIE

(to Ramon)

This is the baddest breaker I know.

He got moves, man. Killer moves.

His older brother was in the Zulu

Kings with my brother.

(Lep nods his head sheepishly)

So how you been? How’s the crew?

LEP

They’re okay. We’re gonna battle Rockwell

at the Heavalo. You gonna be there?

KENNIE

You know it. Wassup with Theodore?

How come he ain’t said nothin? You too

dusted to talk?

THEODORE

Hi, Kennie. Wassup, Ramon?

An uncomfortable silence fills the room.

KENNIE

Wassup with these boys out there, messin’

with our mics?

THEODORE

(coughs)

Those be my new emcees.

KENNIE

Now how can that be? When Cholly

and me, we your emcees.

THEODORE

Not no more. I just got these two

yesterday. They got a record out

and everthin'. And they was lookin

for a deejay wit a system. They

gonna let me be the deejay.

Lep stares at the ground. Kennie looks at Ramon. Ramon, who has been trying to get a hit off the minature joint suddenly swallows the roach, makes a stricken face, and then coughs it out.

RAMON

Damn.

KENNIE

So what about the hookie party

tomorrow?

THEODORE

They gonna be there. You wanna

come, you can come. I’ll put you

down. You can do a show if you want,

but you ain’t gonna get down

wit no money. Cause I got

professional emcees now. And they

gotta get the money.

KENNIE

Tell me. You heard they record?

Whatta you think, Lep?

LEP

(shakes his head)

This between you two. I ain’t

involved.

KENNIE

(loud enough to hear in the

next room)

I heard it. It’s wack! It’s NOT

gettin over.

(to Theodore)

Anyway, I thought we had an

agreement. Ramon here, he TAUGHT

you how to deejay.

THEODORE

All I know is, you been talkin for

months bout how we gonna play the

Heavalo and you ain’t played there

yet. These guys done already played

the Heavalo. Twice! They down with

Herc. Times have changed. You gotta

have a record to get over these

days. And you ain’t got no record.

KENNIE

Well, if that’s how you feel...what

can I say? It’s your system ain’t

it?

THEODORE

It ain’t nothin personal. You know

I like you. But I gotta do what’s

best for business.

KENNIE

(pointing at tape cassette)

That’s my tape, right?

THEODORE

Take it.

Kennie picks up the cassette.

KENNIE

(to Ramon)

Let’s go.

(they exit)

INT. LIVINGROOM THEODORE’S HOUSE

Kennie and Ramon walk through the room, pointedly ignoring Frosty and Mel.

KENNIE

(to Cholly)

Let’s break out.

EXT. STREET BY THEADORE’S

Kennie, Ramon and Cholly exit from the house. Kennie is animatedly explaining to Cholly that they have just lost their access to a sound system, which means they can’t throw jams for their friends in the park anymore.

CHOLLY

That sucker. I’m gonna crush him.

KENNIE

How we ’sposed to get a rep with no

sound system? He’s turning into a

dust junkie anyway. We lucky to get

rid of him. You’ll see.

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. BEDROOM KENNIE’S HOUSE -- DAY

A CLOSE SHOT of a door. We hear a BANGING NOISE.

HELENE (O.S.)

Kennie! Get up! I’m not gonna call

you again!

KENNIE

I’m up.

ANGLE ON THE BED where Kennie has a blanket pulled over his head. He is not up. In fact, he is in danger of falling back asleep.

INT. HALLWAY KENNIE’S HOUSE

Kennie’s mother, HELENE, walks away from the door while wiping her hands on a dishrag. She is a stout woman with a warm, trusting face. LEE SHAKLEFORD, 12, runs down the hallway. He is a bit hyperactive.

LEE

I’ll get him.

HELENE

You get back to the table and

finish your breakfast.

Helene ushers Lee down the hallway.

INT. KENNIE’S BEDROOM -- DAY

The body underneath the blanket rolls over and moans. A WIDER ANGLE shows the interior of the room. It has two beds, two dressers and piles of junked electronic equipment, salvaged from the garbage. Kennie has converted some of this junk into a workable stereo. The walls of the room are plastered with flyers for rap shows. The names "Kool Herc" "Afrika Bambaataa" and "Grandmster Flash" appear prominently on the flyers.

INT. KENNIE’S KITCHEN

LEE

(playing with his cereal)

...and Danny said we didn’t have to

go to school.

HELENE

(drying a glass)

What happened to Danny? He used to

be smart. Sounds like he’s gonna

turn out like his brother.

LEE

I want to be a rapper like Kennie.

HELENE

(sighs)

What do you want to fool with that

silliness for? Your brother is

getting too old for it and you’re

too young. I never heard anything

so ridiculous. It’s just a fad.

It’ll never take the place of real

singing.

Kennie enters the kitchen and throws his arms back in a monumental yawn. He reaches for a glass and fills it with water.

KENNIE

Don’t you two ever get tired of

talkin bout me?

HELENE

Did you get your beauty sleep, Mr.

Brando?

LEE

Tell mom we don’t have to go to

school.

KENNIE

Says who?

HELENE

Danny Wood.

KENNIE

Danny "wack attack" Wood. The

serious serio-so chumpski.

We hear a WHISTLE FROM THE STREET.

CUT TO:

EXT. STREET BY KENNIE’S

Ramon is whistling with his fingers in his mouth.

INT. KENNIE’S KITCHEN

KENNIE

Gotta go.

(kissing Helene)

Have a good day. Don’t work too

hard.

EXT. STREET BY KENNIE’S

Ramon is waiting for Kennie to come out of his building. A small boy carrying a stick chases another boy across the street.

RAMON

(laughing)

Run Frankie! He’s gaining on you!

Kennie emerges from his building. He greets Ramon and they walk down the street to the busstop.

KENNIE

Any luck locating a system?

RAMON

Naw.

KENNIE

Man, you better get on the case.

Otherwise we might just have to

find a new deejay. We sure could

use one that knows how to cut.

RAMON

Who can cut wit emcees that can’t

keep the beat.

KENNIE

Who dat?

RAMON

You, bro.

Kennie trys to knock Ramon’s hat off, but Ramon deftly jumps out of reach and laughs.

EXT. ROOSEVELT HIGH SCHOOL

Students are pouring into the entrance of Roosevelt High. Located on Fordham Road, the school has a somewhat wild reputation. Most of the students are lower class blacks and Hispanics. Since a lot of drugs are sold nearby, security is strict inside the school. In fact, the atmosphere is closer to a reformatory than a high school. A bus stops in front of the school and ejects a crowd of kids carrying books. Kennie and Ramon are in the center of the group. They mount the steps to Roosevelt.

KENNIE

(looking ahead)

Just don’t bump into anybody. We

got Zulus on one side and Five

Percenters on the other.

RAMON

How can you tell the Five

Percenters?

KENNIE

They the ones always talkin' bout pork.

INT. MATH CLASS

Kennie sits in the back of the class and doodles graffiti in a notebook. He stares out the window. A white subway train crosses the horizon in the distance.

INT. LUNCHROOM

A long line stretches down the hall into the lunchroom. No roughhousing is allowed during lunch period and a group of beefy gym teachers are standing by to insure order. The tables closest to the windows have been taken over by the football and basketball teams, who do not encourage uninvited visitors to sit with them. For the most part, girls and boys are at different tables, as are blacks, whites and Hispanics.

Kennie, Ramon and Cholly collect their lunch and find seats at the table reserved for the b-boys, the only fully integrated table in the room.

CHOLLY

...this guy was givin somethin out

and I said, "I don’t want that

shit." This teacher hears me and

right away takes the offensive. He

wants to see my hall pass...

RAMON

That’s when he really started cursing.

CHOLLY

No way. I did NOT curse.

KENNIE

What did you say?

CHOLLY

(carefully picking his words)

I said: I’m not talkin to you and you

better get out of my face or I will chair you.

Kennie and Ramon laugh. Kennie checks for the nearest gym teacher to make sure they aren’t being overheard.

KENNIE

That sounds like a minimum of a one day suspension to me.

CHOLLY

If I DO get suspended, you better

stay out wit me, bro.

RAMON

Yo, we could hit the tunnels! You know

the Transit Authority just started a new front

on the graffiti wars. They painting cars they run

through the buff all white. It’s like the perfect backdrop,

man. It’s like they’re handing us a fresh canvas

or somethin'.

CHOLLY

(slapping five)

The search for a white train bomb, I’m down,

bro. But it should be a ten car masterpiece that flows

together as one giant, moving billboard. And that

means massive amounts of paint. And that means

rackin' up.

KENNIE

Before you risk your life and limb and a month

in Rikers, especially since the white cars are the most

heavily defended. Let us entertain an alternative

mission that doesn’t involve potential jail time. I

suggest making the rounds at these local record

companies that are jumpin' on rap. And let if be known

this info comes direct from from Afrika Bambaataa hisself.

Kennie pulls a piece of paper out of his pants pocket and

shows it to Ramon and Cholly.

RAMON

All right! I’m down wit this.

INT. RECORD COMPANY OFFICE

Kennie, Cholly and Ramon enter. Kennie talks to a receptionist. He holds up a tape cassette. The receptionist looks at the tape and shakes her head.

EXT. RECORD STORE

Kennie, Ramon and Cholly enter the store.

INT. RECORD STORE

Kennie talks to a bearded man sitting behind a counter. Kennie holds up a tape. The engineer shakes his head.

INT. RECORD COMPANY OFFICE

Kennie, Cholly and Ramon are grouped around a desk with two independent record producers. They shake their heads.

EXT. SNEAKER SHOP -- DUSK

A CLOSE SHOT on the window of a sneaker store. A wide variety of tennis, basketball and running shoes are on display.

RAMON

Look at the space boots. Fresh! I want some.

CHOLLY

Those Nikes are fresh too.

A WIDER ANGLE shows Kennie, Ramon and Cholly standing in front of the store.

RAMON

I was here last week and this homey ax for

a pair of Kareems. He put one on and says:

"Damn! This shoe is TIGHT. Can I try a size

ten?" So the clerk goes into the back and

zoooom...that boy was GONE! It took him

less than five seconds to get off the block.

I never saw anyone run so fuckin' fast.

KENNIE

Let’s walk by the Heavalo.

RAMON

What for? It’s closed.

KENNIE

Come on, it’s only like five blocks

from here.

(looks back for Cholly)

Hey! Will you hurry up! Why we always

got to wait for you? I got a grandmother

that walks faster than you do.

CHOLLY

Yo, man. What’s the hurry?

RAMON

He wants to check out the Heavalo.

Cholly peers over the top of a pair of imaginary sunglasses. (He is performing an imitation of Kool Herc, the deejay who runs the Heavalo.)

CHOLLY

Rock the house, my mellow. It’s the

serio-so jointski.

A LONG SHOT shows the three friends laughing and joking as

they turn the corner and proceed down Jerome Avemue to the

Heavalo.

EXT. THE BASE HOUSE

Two Casanova’s are standing on the stoop that leads to their base house, where they sell cocaine to people, some of whom want to come in and freebase inside. This operation is mostly for the local highrollers and is a step up from street dealers. You can also get weed, dust and heroin from the Casanovas.

CASANOVA

Yo, Cholly! Come in and join the

party, hahaha.

CHOLLY

Unfortunately, I ain’t got no funds

wit me right now.

Kennie, Ramon and Cholly walk past the base house.

RAMON

What’s going on in there?

CHOLLY

You don’t know? That’s the new Casanova

base house. They used to be a division of the

Black Spades. I know people that walked in there

with thousands of dollars and left with nuthin' but a

sore throat and a sexually transmitted disease.

RAMON

You mean, they gettin it ON in there?

KENNIE

If a girl is strung out and gettin high for

days and days, she’ll get to a state where

she’ll do ANYTHING for a hit.

RAMON

I snorted coke before, but I never

done base.

CHOLLY

It’s the ultimate high. Just ax

Richard Pryor.

KENNIE

Being onstage in the flow, that is

the ultimate high.

EXT. THE HEAVALO

ANOTHER ANGLE shows the nightclub, located in a sprawling, one-story structure. A colorful sign over the door reads: "HEAVALO." A placard next to the door reads: "Next Friday! The Ultimate Jam! NYC’s #1 Record Rappers! The Treacherous Three! Put the boogie in your body! Doors open at 10! Come in peace!" Kennie, Ramon and Cholly read the placard. Kennie trys to peer into a blacked-out window. Ramon inspects a graffiti tag on the side of the building. Cholly puts his hand on the doorknob and finds it unlocked. He opens the door a crack and peers inside.

INT. THE HEAVALO

CHOLLY’S POV. The Heavalo has a medium-sized, wooden dance floor, a long bar and a small stage, where the deejay sets up his equipment. The walls are glossy black with gold trim. A disco ball hangs from the ceiling. The room is empty.

KENNIE (O.S.)

Man, what you doin?

CHOLLY

Yo, man, let’s go in.

KENNIE

You must be crazy.

CHOLLY

Nobody’s here.

CUT TO:

INT. HEAVALO OFFICE

KOOL HERC, a large muscular black, is seated behind a desk. The walls are covered with autographed pictures of rap and disco celebrities. Herc is listening to the radio and opening his mail. He hums along with the record. He hears something, stops for a moment and listens. He turns down the radio and hears voices and footsteps on the stage.

INT. THE HEAVALO

Kennie is standing on the stage holding an empty mike stand in one hand. Ramon stomps his feet, slaps his hands and lays down a beat with a human beatbox routine. Kennie and Cholly launch into their favorite rap routine.

KENNIE

Yo check it out. We rockin the Heavalo.

(he raps between his beat-box sounds)

We throw down hard and I aim to

please,

CHOLLY

with finesse, to impress, the young

la-dies.

KENNIE

We got rhymes galore and much, much

more. So eliminate the possibility,

CHOLLY

...there exists emcees wit more

consistency...

The door to the office opens. Kool Herc peers out. He looks over the top of his sunglasses in the same manner imitated by Cholly. A CLOSE SHOT of Kennie as he starts to ham up his rap routine. Kennie’s eyes are closed. He is pretending it is Friday night and he is onstage at the Heavalo.

KENNIE

Put you hands in the air and listen to me,

cause you’re listening to the sounds of the

mighty Soulski. I want you to get loose,

get ready to rock. I’m gonna paralyze

your mind and put you in shock.

KOOL HERC

The club is closed guys, okay?

Kennie’s performance grinds to a halt as he realizes he is being watched. He sheepishly moves the mike stand to the rear of the stage. Ramon and Cholly have backed up all the way to the door.

EXT. STREET BY HEAVALO

A LONG SHOT shows Kennie, Cholly and Ramon leaving the Heavalo. Cholly does an imitation of Kool Herc peering over the top of his glasses. Ramon imitates Kennie rapping on the mike and doing a double-take on Kool Herc. Cholly says goodbye and splits off. Kennie and Ramon continue to the busstop.

EXT. BUSSTOP

Kennie and Ramon wait for the bus. Ramon gets out his school bus pass.

ANOTHER ANGLE shows the arrival of SMITTY AND THE CASANOVAS.

Smitty is a bit bored and looking for someone to pick on. Kennie senses this and tenses as Smitty walks by. Smitty looks at Kennie but says nothing. After Smitty passes, Kennie shows signs of relief. Suddenly, however, Smitty turns and walks back to Ramon. He stares at the bus pass in Ramon’s hand.

SMITTY

Yo, man. What’s that in your hand?

A bus pass. Can I take a look at that?

Ramon doesn’t know what to say. He looks to Kennie for help.

KENNIE

(mildly, to Smitty)


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